Some parts are not correlative, it makes no sense. I think you made simple steps where you could have written runs with transfering moves. The last part is hard to rate all the steps as a D17, I think it should be a D18. 8/10 for me.
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It's okay in from the beginning, till I feel a little bit awkward rhythm on refferain, but still nice tho~ and too hard for 17 lol xD